Role Model

this week room 4 was doing a slide about who is your Role Model my role model is
Mrs Stone and my parents.

WALT: justify our ideas

choclate poster.

this week room 4 was doing a  chocolate challenge . Crunchie Bar was our group and their was 3 others. we had to make a poster about our chocolate.

WALT: justify our ideas

 

Chocolate Challenge

Chocolate Challenge

Crunchie

Crunchie is yum because it is full of flavor .
If you eat Crunchie you will have the best feeling ever.
I have tasted it.It tasted like a mouth full of chumminess.
The ingredients they have will make you fell in love with
crunchie.

Crunchie has alot of ingredients in. It has golden
hokey pokey  honeycomb covered in cadbury milk chocolate.
It’s has 931kg of energy , 7.5g 11% 14.9% fat and the Sugar
31.4g 35% 62.8g. The Chocolate makes you happy if you are
feeling sad .

Chocolate Covered Honeycomb Crunchie bars based
on the Cadbury Crunchie candy bar, these gorgeous chocolate
treats contain only 6 ingredients and are gluten-free, vegan and
fabulously good.

I think Kit kat has a lot yummy ingredients.They make their chocolate so yummy that you will be dreaming about it.It was so hard to compete with there chocolate since people love Kit Kat even I love Kit kat.

this week room 4 was writing about Chocolate we were writing 3 paragraph about crunchie.

WALT: justify our ideas

Because I said so?

Because I Said So?

WALT: justify our ideas using conjunctions.

I believe that children should wear uniform to school.
We need uniforms because if you go on a trip and you
don’t have uniform then you can lose one or two of your
student and that is why you should wear uniform.  When
you see me in my uniform then you know what school I go to.

Bok Choy slide

this weed my group was reading a story it was called Bok Choy.

WALT: make inferences about a text

Bok Choy

Justifying an argument

Justifying an argument

WALT: justify our ideas using conjunctions

Check out the two paragraphs and then answer the questions below

Author A:

I strongly believe that students need school uniforms. Students need school
uniforms because they show people what school they go to. All of the students look tidy
because they are in the same school and its like free advertising because when people see
the uniform they think of the school. So yeah, school uniforms are good.

Author B:

I firmly believe that school uniforms should be banned. School uniforms are
costly and they put a lot of pressure on the student’s caregivers. Children need
new school uniforms every time they grow and change schools. With some items
of clothing costing a hundred dollars or more, the cost involved in buying a new
school uniform is huge! It is particularly difficult for families with two or more
students, as it is hard enough to feed a large family let alone buy an expensive
school uniform every year for each child. School uniforms should be banned
for the benefit of parents everywhere!

Which argument do you think is stronger? Author B has more information of uniforms.

What vocabulary do the authors use that you would like to steal? Particularly,difficult,advertising.

What did you like about the paragraphs? I like that student need uniforms so they look the same.

What do you think the authors could improve on? More information and words

Highlight the signposts (topic sentences) the authors use in purple.

Highlight the conjunctions or connecting words (for, because, and, but…) that
the authors use in blue.