Wednesday, 7 December 2016

The Animal Race.

Animal Racing!

Walt: write a narrativeWalt: add detail to our introduction (setting and characters).
At Pt England school we were going to have a animal race. Each student get to chose their own animal and I picked a crocodile because crocodiles has sharp teeth to scare The other animal. There was 9 lines for the race I was number 7  then we went to the lines then. Get marks get set and go!! My crocodile and I  went. so fast that i nearly fell we were close to the finish line but my animal got really exciting to win the race then my friend Petesa was flying so closer to us we ran and ran  but Petesa
Came passed us my animal we slow and all of the other animal came passed us and we came 9th
And Petesa came first.

                                                  The end.!!!!!!!!   

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